Done my first poetry exercise from the book I bought. Basic iambic pentameters.
My boss is sitting opposite me now.
What is he thinking? That's what I would know.
Last night the weather hot and sultry was;
I wish a cooler temp'rature tonight.
A worm, a bird, a fox, a man, a worm.
A circle stretches round us ev'ry one.
This pencil writes; this rubber hates it all.
A fruity loaf for lunch but none for tea.
The changeling man has died. I shall not mourn
a life so filled with lies as this one was.
I work for poor and needy human beings.
My Hindu mate will love this line the most.
Tuesday, 30 June 2009
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Later did another...
ReplyDelete'Tis Karno's birthday, this line's just for him,
And this one too, to show how much he means.
Hey i really liked this. I kid you not
ReplyDeleteespecially this line: This pencil writes; this rubber hates it all.
I thnk the imagery is great, short and concise but deep and suraface at the same time